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Saturday, December 6, 2008

Who am I???


Who am i...
a set of equations...
a bundle of emotions...
Who am i...
strong, sensible, cool...
vulnerable, insecure or maybe a fool...
Who am i...
a caged bird who wants to be free...
a wandering soul in search of my own sweet tree...
Who am i...
so many facets, so many a mask...
uncovering the layers, seems quite a task...

5 comments:

Ostrobogulous said...

Hey Pallavi......love the layout of the blog and the name as well!!!

Hmm.....one thing about the poem is that the rhymes are not forced and come naturally, something which should be in a good poem but very often is not found. Also love the thought structure, esp the ease in which one thought melts into the other, for instance:

"Who am i...
a caged bird who wants to be free...
a wandering soul in search of my own sweet tree..."

This gives the poem a sense of smoothness and the reader quickly gauges the meaning implied. All in all, a good poem that can be read again and again!

Arnav

chaitanya said...

Hey PAL ..... nice blog, loved the layout, more can be done to improvise on the attractiveness of it !!! maybe by trying some different color combos.

now about the poem, i am glad after reading it that you are from few of those people who actually are in search to find that who actually they are !!!! and not just shouting and wandering here and there just trying hard that they catch the attention of the people.....

chaitanya joshi

Pallavi Ganju said...

hey thanks ppl:)...

Mayu said...

Actually..!! I like the fact that highly significant and interesting questions like these do interest people..!!

Sapna said...

Very Beautiful poem dear.....please keep writing!

 
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